Angels in their Midst

Tears in a Bottle is filled with short, easy to read articles that address every day life from the perspective of my personal walk with God. Some articles in Tears in a Bottle were previously published by Regular Baptist Press, either in their Sunday School adult papers or their magazine, The Baptist Bulletin.

Today's feature article, About Angels, was originally titled Angels in their Midst and was a follow-up article to Letting Go, yesterday's feature article.

About Angels tells how God's angels protected my son and his platoon during the heavy fighting in the Battle of Fallujah. Angels are real. This is not a feel-good fantasy.

Click here for your copy, either Kindle or paperback, today.
~Tricia

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